{"id":50,"date":"2020-06-11T21:12:03","date_gmt":"2020-06-11T21:12:03","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/buildingblocks\/chapter\/the-short-story\/"},"modified":"2020-06-11T21:12:03","modified_gmt":"2020-06-11T21:12:03","slug":"the-short-story","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/buildingblocks\/chapter\/the-short-story\/","title":{"raw":"6.1 The Short Story","rendered":"6.1 The Short Story"},"content":{"raw":"\nShort stories, like essays, have beginnings, middles, and endings. Sometimes, they play with that structure\u2014starting in the middle, for example, and then using a <strong>flashback<\/strong> to the past to explain the beginning of the story to the reader\u2014but let\u2019s begin with their simplest form, especially if writing stories is new to you.\n\nStories have a <strong>protagonist<\/strong>, also called the <strong>main character<\/strong><em>. <\/em>This person typically wants something. It could be anything: love, a decent night\u2019s rest, to have one last chance to gaze on a particular postage stamp. It\u2019s your job as the writer to make sense of the main character\u2019s desire. Why does she want to look at that particular postage stamp so much? What does it mean to her? The reason behind this desire will help the reader to identify with the main character and to become invested in her story. This is crucial. If we don\u2019t care why she wants to see the stamp, we\u2019re hardly going to stick around to read the rest of the story.\n\nStories also typically have an <strong>antagonist<\/strong>. Many antagonists are human\u2014the mother who forbids the main character to jet off to see the postage stamp, for example. But an antagonist can also be a force: the main character\u2019s lack of money to buy that plane ticket, incipient blindness that will prevent her from seeing the stamp when she gets to it, or debilitating anxiety that means she has practically no prospect of making the journey. Even the repressive regime of the character\u2019s country, the one that prevents her from travelling to see the stamp, could be an antagonistic force.\n<table style=\"border-collapse: collapse; width: 100%;\" border=\"0\"><caption>Table 6.1 Dos and don'ts of short stories<\/caption>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 42.2869%;\" scope=\"col\">Things to always do<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 57.7131%;\" scope=\"col\">Things to never do<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 42.2869%; vertical-align: top;\">\n<ul>\n \t<li>Show, don't tell, readers what to think.<\/li>\n \t<li>Use vivid, descriptive language employing the five senses.<\/li>\n \t<li>Include a conflict.<\/li>\n \t<li>Incorporate specific, surprising details.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 57.7131%; vertical-align: top;\">\n<ul>\n \t<li>Tell readers what to think about a given topic. (<strong>Example<\/strong>: <em>Gurleen's father was a terrible man \u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n \t<li>Use clich\u00e9s. (<strong>Example<\/strong>: <em>Van doesn't have a care in the world \u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n \t<li>Rely on description to carry the story. (<strong>Example<\/strong>: <em>It is a beautiful, sunny day. Jonas lives in a house with large windows \u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n \t<li>Include clashing imagery (also known as mixed metaphors). (<strong>Example<\/strong>: <em>Coco was ready to seize the hilt of this information gushing forth in a fountain \u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--exercises\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Review Questions<\/p>\n\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<ol>\n \t<li>Use an object in the classroom\u2014someone\u2019s hat or coat, a particular book or piece of furniture\u2014to write a short story. Where does the object come into the story? What is its significance? Who are the characters? What is the conflict?<\/li>\n \t<li>Try mind mapping a story. Start with one element: a setting, a situation, a conflict, or a character, for example. Then use the mind map technique described in <a class=\"internal\" href=\"\/buildingblocks\/chapter\/mind-maps\/\">Chapter 2.2 Mind Maps<\/a> to draw different aspects of the story that you might write about. (Hint: For ways to make your writing come alive, review <a class=\"internal\" href=\"\/buildingblocks\/chapter\/descriptive-paragraphs\/\">Chapter 3.1 Descriptive Paragraphs<\/a>, which gives you lists of words relating to the five senses and explains how to show, not tell, readers about your subject.)<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--examples\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Points to Consider<\/p>\n\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<ol type=\"a\">\n \t<li>See how your story would change if you changed a non-plot element. For example, what if, instead of the story being narrated in the main character\u2019s voice, or first person (\u201cI opened the door\u201d), you changed it to third person (\u201cShe opened the door\u201d)? How about if you moved all of the action from past tense (\u201cI opened the door\u201d) to present tense (\u201cI open the door\u201d)? How about if you changed the setting or time period, from, say, a commune in Israel to Soviet Russia, or from the current era to the past?<\/li>\n \t<li>Trade stories with a classmate. Use the peer review process described in <a class=\"internal\" href=\"\/buildingblocks\/chapter\/peer-review\/\">Chapter 7.2 Peer Review<\/a> to give each other feedback. Revise your story based on the feedback you received. Do substantial revisions first. As a last step, proofread.<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n","rendered":"<p>Short stories, like essays, have beginnings, middles, and endings. Sometimes, they play with that structure\u2014starting in the middle, for example, and then using a <strong>flashback<\/strong> to the past to explain the beginning of the story to the reader\u2014but let\u2019s begin with their simplest form, especially if writing stories is new to you.<\/p>\n<p>Stories have a <strong>protagonist<\/strong>, also called the <strong>main character<\/strong><em>. <\/em>This person typically wants something. It could be anything: love, a decent night\u2019s rest, to have one last chance to gaze on a particular postage stamp. It\u2019s your job as the writer to make sense of the main character\u2019s desire. Why does she want to look at that particular postage stamp so much? What does it mean to her? The reason behind this desire will help the reader to identify with the main character and to become invested in her story. This is crucial. If we don\u2019t care why she wants to see the stamp, we\u2019re hardly going to stick around to read the rest of the story.<\/p>\n<p>Stories also typically have an <strong>antagonist<\/strong>. Many antagonists are human\u2014the mother who forbids the main character to jet off to see the postage stamp, for example. But an antagonist can also be a force: the main character\u2019s lack of money to buy that plane ticket, incipient blindness that will prevent her from seeing the stamp when she gets to it, or debilitating anxiety that means she has practically no prospect of making the journey. Even the repressive regime of the character\u2019s country, the one that prevents her from travelling to see the stamp, could be an antagonistic force.<\/p>\n<table style=\"border-collapse: collapse; width: 100%;\">\n<caption>Table 6.1 Dos and don&#8217;ts of short stories<\/caption>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<th style=\"width: 42.2869%;\" scope=\"col\">Things to always do<\/th>\n<th style=\"width: 57.7131%;\" scope=\"col\">Things to never do<\/th>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 42.2869%; vertical-align: top;\">\n<ul>\n<li>Show, don&#8217;t tell, readers what to think.<\/li>\n<li>Use vivid, descriptive language employing the five senses.<\/li>\n<li>Include a conflict.<\/li>\n<li>Incorporate specific, surprising details.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<td style=\"width: 57.7131%; vertical-align: top;\">\n<ul>\n<li>Tell readers what to think about a given topic. (<strong>Example<\/strong>: <em>Gurleen&#8217;s father was a terrible man \u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n<li>Use clich\u00e9s. (<strong>Example<\/strong>: <em>Van doesn&#8217;t have a care in the world \u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n<li>Rely on description to carry the story. (<strong>Example<\/strong>: <em>It is a beautiful, sunny day. Jonas lives in a house with large windows \u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n<li>Include clashing imagery (also known as mixed metaphors). (<strong>Example<\/strong>: <em>Coco was ready to seize the hilt of this information gushing forth in a fountain \u2026<\/em>)<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--exercises\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Review Questions<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<ol>\n<li>Use an object in the classroom\u2014someone\u2019s hat or coat, a particular book or piece of furniture\u2014to write a short story. Where does the object come into the story? What is its significance? Who are the characters? What is the conflict?<\/li>\n<li>Try mind mapping a story. Start with one element: a setting, a situation, a conflict, or a character, for example. Then use the mind map technique described in <a class=\"internal\" href=\"\/buildingblocks\/chapter\/mind-maps\/\">Chapter 2.2 Mind Maps<\/a> to draw different aspects of the story that you might write about. (Hint: For ways to make your writing come alive, review <a class=\"internal\" href=\"\/buildingblocks\/chapter\/descriptive-paragraphs\/\">Chapter 3.1 Descriptive Paragraphs<\/a>, which gives you lists of words relating to the five senses and explains how to show, not tell, readers about your subject.)<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--examples\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">Points to Consider<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<ol type=\"a\">\n<li>See how your story would change if you changed a non-plot element. For example, what if, instead of the story being narrated in the main character\u2019s voice, or first person (\u201cI opened the door\u201d), you changed it to third person (\u201cShe opened the door\u201d)? How about if you moved all of the action from past tense (\u201cI opened the door\u201d) to present tense (\u201cI open the door\u201d)? How about if you changed the setting or time period, from, say, a commune in Israel to Soviet Russia, or from the current era to the past?<\/li>\n<li>Trade stories with a classmate. Use the peer review process described in <a class=\"internal\" href=\"\/buildingblocks\/chapter\/peer-review\/\">Chapter 7.2 Peer Review<\/a> to give each other feedback. Revise your story based on the feedback you received. Do substantial revisions first. 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