{"id":175,"date":"2020-06-12T16:32:04","date_gmt":"2020-06-12T16:32:04","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/chapter\/appendix-h-peer-review-essentials\/"},"modified":"2022-06-30T20:46:06","modified_gmt":"2022-06-30T20:46:06","slug":"peer-review-essentials","status":"publish","type":"chapter","link":"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/chapter\/peer-review-essentials\/","title":{"raw":"Appendix H: Peer Review Essentials","rendered":"Appendix H: Peer Review Essentials"},"content":{"raw":"Peer review entails having a peer -- a fellow student who is familiar with your assignment, or a colleague who understands your purpose in writing -- read and offer feedback on the effectiveness of your document and how it might be improved.\u00a0 While peer review ultimately benefits the reader as a form of \"quality control\" ensuring an effective final product, it also has clear benefits for both the author and the reviewer.\u00a0 In the process of peer review, authors can get helpful feedback on how they can improve their drafts, and reviewers can learn from the document they are reviewing, reinforce the assignment and grading criteria, and come back to their own draft with a fresh perspective. For both it is a helpful way to review content, structure, style and formatting before submitting your final document to its intended reader. Building in time for peer review also helps with time management, as you have a completed final draft well before the due date.\r\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--key-takeaways\"><header class=\"textbox__header\">\r\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">In order to attain the maximum benefits of Peer Review, both authors and reviewers should keep the following strategies in mind:<\/p>\r\n\r\n<\/header>\r\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\r\n\r\n<strong>Author Strategies\r\n<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><strong>Be prepared<\/strong>: submit the most polished and complete draft possible in order to fully benefit from peer review.\u00a0 A partial or very rough draft can benefit from some preliminary review, but a completed draft can elicit more helpful feedback.<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Give reviewer some guidance<\/strong>: describe the concerns you have about your paper at this point.\u00a0 Alert your reviewer to areas where you would particularly like some feedback.\u00a0 If the reviewer is not familiar with your purpose and audience, fill them in.<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Be open to new ideas<\/strong>: avoid becoming defensive about the feedback; remember, your reviewer is trying help you improve your draft.\u00a0 Consider alternative viewpoints you may not have thought of before; listen before deciding what you will do.<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Consider advice carefully<\/strong>: think critically about whether the reviewer\u2019s suggestions will help you to improve your draft and if they are appropriate for your purpose and audience.\u00a0 What and how you revise is ultimately up to you; take your reviewer\u2019s advice with a grain of salt, and seek additional advice if you are unsure what to do.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<strong>Reviewer Strategies\r\n<\/strong>\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><strong>Know the document's purpose<\/strong>: review the assignment description and\/or grading rubric before reviewing the draft; know what the paper is trying to achieve before you assess whether it needs revision to achieve it.<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Focus on the positive<\/strong>: be honest and critical, but also point out strong areas within the writing where things are working well.\u00a0 Use positive, constructive tone to discuss areas that could use improvement.\u00a0 Don\u2019t gush (\u201cyour paper is so awesome!\u201d) and don\u2019t trash (\u201cThis totally sucks! Rewrite the whole thing!\u201d).\u00a0 Remember your purpose is to help the author find ways to improve the draft; recognize what is already good, and suggest what needs further work.<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Be specific<\/strong>: explain why a sentence, paragraph, or image needs improvement; explain why you as the reader are confused or bothered by a specific phrase or passage, or why the logic does not flow for you (be \"reader centred\").<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Be courteous<\/strong>: be aware of your language use and tone when addressing peers. Avoid patronizing or \u201ctalking down\u201d to your peers when giving advice.<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Don\u2019t edit<\/strong>: Your job is reviewer, not editor.\u00a0 Don\u2019t fix errors or phrasing problems; just point out areas that need improvement.\u00a0 You might offer ONE sample correction to demonstrate what you mean, but do not engage in wholesale editing.\u00a0 The purpose of peer review is for each person to learn how to edit their own document based on reviewer feedback.<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong>Be efficient<\/strong>: don\u2019t overwhelm your author with too much detailed feedback.\u00a0 A page that has more feedback notes than content will be very difficult to process.\u00a0 Focus on a handful (3-6?) of the most important revisions that are needed to help improve the draft. For example, if there are numerous spelling errors, don\u2019t point them all out; highlight one or two and then comment that the draft contains numerous spelling errors that will need fixing before it can be submitted.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\nTest your knowledge of the strategies above.\r\n<div class=\"h5p\">[h5p id=\"42\"]<\/div>\r\n<div class=\"pdf\">\r\n<div class=\"textbox\">\r\n\r\n<strong>H5P: Author and Reviewer Strategies<\/strong>\r\n\r\nBased on the information in this section, choose all of the reviewer strategies. *Some may apply to both but choose the ones specifically listed in this section.\r\n\r\n<img class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-362\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/06\/H5P-42.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"693\" height=\"327\" \/>\r\n\r\n<\/div>\r\n<\/div>\r\n<h1>Methods of giving feedback<\/h1>\r\nThere are many ways to provide feedback on someone\u2019s work; how you do this will depend on what form of work you are reviewing, the context, and the situation.\u00a0 For example, if you are doing a peer review in a classroom with your peer groups face-to-face, you might give feedback verbally, or you might put hand-written feedback on their papers.\u00a0 In some cases, your instructor might give you a checklist to use, which you must fill out as you are reading your peer\u2019s draft.\r\n\r\nIf working remotely, you might read your peer\u2019s work as an online post, and post a reply in which you write out all your feedback within the reply window, like the one below.\r\n\r\n<img class=\"aligncenter wp-image-172 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread.png\" alt=\"Example of a reply to an online discussion post, giving feedback about the length of a sentence that should be revised. \" width=\"1500\" height=\"682\" \/>\r\n\r\nTo offer more detailed feedback, you might download the author\u2019s document and write inline comments on the draft \u2013 ideally using a different colour to make your comments standout more easily, as seen below.\r\n\r\n<img class=\"aligncenter wp-image-173 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904.png\" alt=\"Example of inline comments, where the author's sentence is highlighted in yellow, and the review adds a comment in red suggesting a revision. \" width=\"1358\" height=\"518\" \/>\r\n\r\nThen upload your revised document as a reply to the author.\u00a0 Inline comments can affect the formatting of the document, so you may instead want to use the \u201cinsert comment\u201d function.\r\n\r\n<img class=\"aligncenter wp-image-174 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317.png\" alt=\"Example of feedback that uses the &quot;insert comments&quot; function in MS Word. \" width=\"2230\" height=\"489\" \/> This will allow the document formatting to remain stable, and your comments can be easily deleted after reading.\r\n\r\nHowever you give feedback, keep in mind these essential guidelines:\r\n<ul>\r\n \t<li><strong><em>Be specific:<\/em><\/strong> give the author specific examples and details; avoid vague or overly general statements<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong><em>Be constructive:<\/em><\/strong> try to help the author improve the quality of their work in substantial ways<\/li>\r\n \t<li><strong><em>Be courteous:<\/em><\/strong> remember the golden rule, and give feedback in a way that you would like to receive it yourself.<\/li>\r\n<\/ul>","rendered":"<p>Peer review entails having a peer &#8212; a fellow student who is familiar with your assignment, or a colleague who understands your purpose in writing &#8212; read and offer feedback on the effectiveness of your document and how it might be improved.\u00a0 While peer review ultimately benefits the reader as a form of &#8220;quality control&#8221; ensuring an effective final product, it also has clear benefits for both the author and the reviewer.\u00a0 In the process of peer review, authors can get helpful feedback on how they can improve their drafts, and reviewers can learn from the document they are reviewing, reinforce the assignment and grading criteria, and come back to their own draft with a fresh perspective. For both it is a helpful way to review content, structure, style and formatting before submitting your final document to its intended reader. Building in time for peer review also helps with time management, as you have a completed final draft well before the due date.<\/p>\n<div class=\"textbox textbox--key-takeaways\">\n<header class=\"textbox__header\">\n<p class=\"textbox__title\">In order to attain the maximum benefits of Peer Review, both authors and reviewers should keep the following strategies in mind:<\/p>\n<\/header>\n<div class=\"textbox__content\">\n<p><strong>Author Strategies<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Be prepared<\/strong>: submit the most polished and complete draft possible in order to fully benefit from peer review.\u00a0 A partial or very rough draft can benefit from some preliminary review, but a completed draft can elicit more helpful feedback.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Give reviewer some guidance<\/strong>: describe the concerns you have about your paper at this point.\u00a0 Alert your reviewer to areas where you would particularly like some feedback.\u00a0 If the reviewer is not familiar with your purpose and audience, fill them in.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Be open to new ideas<\/strong>: avoid becoming defensive about the feedback; remember, your reviewer is trying help you improve your draft.\u00a0 Consider alternative viewpoints you may not have thought of before; listen before deciding what you will do.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Consider advice carefully<\/strong>: think critically about whether the reviewer\u2019s suggestions will help you to improve your draft and if they are appropriate for your purpose and audience.\u00a0 What and how you revise is ultimately up to you; take your reviewer\u2019s advice with a grain of salt, and seek additional advice if you are unsure what to do.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>Reviewer Strategies<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong>Know the document&#8217;s purpose<\/strong>: review the assignment description and\/or grading rubric before reviewing the draft; know what the paper is trying to achieve before you assess whether it needs revision to achieve it.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Focus on the positive<\/strong>: be honest and critical, but also point out strong areas within the writing where things are working well.\u00a0 Use positive, constructive tone to discuss areas that could use improvement.\u00a0 Don\u2019t gush (\u201cyour paper is so awesome!\u201d) and don\u2019t trash (\u201cThis totally sucks! Rewrite the whole thing!\u201d).\u00a0 Remember your purpose is to help the author find ways to improve the draft; recognize what is already good, and suggest what needs further work.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Be specific<\/strong>: explain why a sentence, paragraph, or image needs improvement; explain why you as the reader are confused or bothered by a specific phrase or passage, or why the logic does not flow for you (be &#8220;reader centred&#8221;).<\/li>\n<li><strong>Be courteous<\/strong>: be aware of your language use and tone when addressing peers. Avoid patronizing or \u201ctalking down\u201d to your peers when giving advice.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Don\u2019t edit<\/strong>: Your job is reviewer, not editor.\u00a0 Don\u2019t fix errors or phrasing problems; just point out areas that need improvement.\u00a0 You might offer ONE sample correction to demonstrate what you mean, but do not engage in wholesale editing.\u00a0 The purpose of peer review is for each person to learn how to edit their own document based on reviewer feedback.<\/li>\n<li><strong>Be efficient<\/strong>: don\u2019t overwhelm your author with too much detailed feedback.\u00a0 A page that has more feedback notes than content will be very difficult to process.\u00a0 Focus on a handful (3-6?) of the most important revisions that are needed to help improve the draft. For example, if there are numerous spelling errors, don\u2019t point them all out; highlight one or two and then comment that the draft contains numerous spelling errors that will need fixing before it can be submitted.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<p>Test your knowledge of the strategies above.<\/p>\n<div class=\"h5p\">\n<div id=\"h5p-42\">\n<div class=\"h5p-content\" data-content-id=\"42\"><\/div>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<div class=\"pdf\">\n<div class=\"textbox\">\n<p><strong>H5P: Author and Reviewer Strategies<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Based on the information in this section, choose all of the reviewer strategies. *Some may apply to both but choose the ones specifically listed in this section.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter size-full wp-image-362\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/06\/H5P-42.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"693\" height=\"327\" srcset=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/06\/H5P-42.png 693w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/06\/H5P-42-300x142.png 300w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/06\/H5P-42-65x31.png 65w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/06\/H5P-42-225x106.png 225w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/06\/H5P-42-350x165.png 350w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 693px) 100vw, 693px\" \/><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/div>\n<h1>Methods of giving feedback<\/h1>\n<p>There are many ways to provide feedback on someone\u2019s work; how you do this will depend on what form of work you are reviewing, the context, and the situation.\u00a0 For example, if you are doing a peer review in a classroom with your peer groups face-to-face, you might give feedback verbally, or you might put hand-written feedback on their papers.\u00a0 In some cases, your instructor might give you a checklist to use, which you must fill out as you are reading your peer\u2019s draft.<\/p>\n<p>If working remotely, you might read your peer\u2019s work as an online post, and post a reply in which you write out all your feedback within the reply window, like the one below.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-172 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread.png\" alt=\"Example of a reply to an online discussion post, giving feedback about the length of a sentence that should be revised.\" width=\"1500\" height=\"682\" srcset=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread.png 1500w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread-300x136.png 300w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread-1024x466.png 1024w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread-768x349.png 768w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread-65x30.png 65w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread-225x102.png 225w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2020\/04\/Post-feedback-as-a-reply-to-a-thread-350x159.png 350w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1500px) 100vw, 1500px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>To offer more detailed feedback, you might download the author\u2019s document and write inline comments on the draft \u2013 ideally using a different colour to make your comments standout more easily, as seen below.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-173 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904.png\" alt=\"Example of inline comments, where the author's sentence is highlighted in yellow, and the review adds a comment in red suggesting a revision.\" width=\"1358\" height=\"518\" srcset=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904.png 1358w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904-300x114.png 300w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904-1024x391.png 1024w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904-768x293.png 768w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904-65x25.png 65w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904-225x86.png 225w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/inline-feedback-e1656621913904-350x134.png 350w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1358px) 100vw, 1358px\" \/><\/p>\n<p>Then upload your revised document as a reply to the author.\u00a0 Inline comments can affect the formatting of the document, so you may instead want to use the \u201cinsert comment\u201d function.<\/p>\n<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"aligncenter wp-image-174 size-full\" src=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317.png\" alt=\"Example of feedback that uses the &quot;insert comments&quot; function in MS Word.\" width=\"2230\" height=\"489\" srcset=\"https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317.png 2230w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317-300x66.png 300w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317-1024x225.png 1024w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317-768x168.png 768w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317-1536x337.png 1536w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317-2048x449.png 2048w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317-65x14.png 65w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317-225x49.png 225w, https:\/\/opentextbc.ca\/technicalwritingh5p\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/387\/2022\/01\/Feedback-via-Comments-e1656621943317-350x77.png 350w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 2230px) 100vw, 2230px\" \/> This will allow the document formatting to remain stable, and your comments can be easily deleted after reading.<\/p>\n<p>However you give feedback, keep in mind these essential guidelines:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><strong><em>Be specific:<\/em><\/strong> give the author specific examples and details; 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